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Lucid Answers by ~HumbleNewb:iconHumbleNewb:



Lucid Answers

You are:

My brain, deciphering the
   signals of my senses.
My lungs, enriching the
   blood cells with oxygen.
My stomach, digesting the
   food for energy usage.
My liver, filtering the
   toxins from my veins.
My heart, pumping rich
   nutrients to every branch.
My skeleton, providing a
   structural frame to stand.
My skin, protecting the
   insides from outside harm.

You are the anatomical form
to my ethereal soul, and I
would wisp away without you.
©2009 ~HumbleNewb
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Author's Comments

This is for a Prose and Poetry Competition: [link] Hope I made the deadline.

Thanks for reading. Will update this box later with how I came up with this title. Gotta go for now.

edit: This poem came to me early in the morning. I saw this competition before the deadline and I was telling a user, betweenthepages, that I might enter it. She nudged me to do it. But some of you, my watchers, may have seen me say that I don't sit and think about what to write. I write down what comes to me. I had nothing for this contest and the deadline was steadily approaching. So, before going to bed, I thought about this challenge. What am I going to write? I posed this question several times before falling asleep. Here's the fun, amazingly cool part: I had a dream, a lucid dream. I was writing this poem, with the words as clear as the upcoming day. I realised that this was the answer to my challenge. So I awoke, grabbed a pencil and sheet of paper and wrote down this poem. That is why it's titled Lucid Answers. :D

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.... i hate being so limited here on this planet.... i love this .. thank you....

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:peace: on :earth:
much :heart:

~ bets
:iconhumblenewb:
You are all so welcome. :hug:

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Featuring:
Made of Clay & ~malice-lust
:iconhumblenewb:
Ooh, the results! I should thank you for prompting me. :hug:

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Featuring:
Made of Clay & ~malice-lust

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